Miserable Fozt going into “Wha-!?” state. I am still not sure if I shall leave the first panel that way. At first there was a speech bubble there (along with the ones from the guys in the background on panel 2) but I thought it looked better without one. 
I am away this weekend – friday-monday – on a short vacation from work. Then I’m going to have a friend over – but things should be on schedule nonetheless~ So I’ll see you next week!
Ah poor Fozt he looks so sad
About the first panel I think the perspective is a bit confusing
Yeah! Sad Fozt is sad!
You are right! I had a lot of trouble with the first two panels – in the first thumbnail version (here: http://www.forsupen.com/INCENTIVES/267_29.jpg) of this page it was one big panel but when I sketched it for this page it didn’t seem to work out at all. But I guess it’s a bit confusing now instead! Do you have any suggestions on how to make it better?
Again, your feedback and comments are always appreciated, Andian!
It maybe would be a bit clearer if it was straight and not lopsided
It took me a few seconds to comprend exactly what I was looking at
But otherwise your drawing skills are really amazing : )
Thanks!
It’s a bit confusing, I admit.
Hey, that’s a good point. I’ll probably go back and fix it when I have time.
Thanks for your useful feedback – I truly appreciate it!