Here’s page 25 – anticipating something, are we? What is that smell and what is Edmund up to?

I am not sure if the speech bubbles are good enough in this one. Seem a bit messy – but I will let it be and remake them later when I get to read through the whole chapter at once and see if it still bothers me.

Maybe I should write “stench” instead of “smell”? What do you think?
Oh, if you ever find any weird sentences or choice of words don’t hesitate to comment.
I’d truly appreciate it! In case you didn’t notice my English isn’t top notch sometimes!