This is the cover of chapter 3! Pissed Denilou is pissed! Wow, I can’t tell you enough how excited I am about this! It’s been more than a year since I drew Försupen. Work, work, work, school and work kind of got in the way, but that’s an other story.

I have been getting several reviews and comments on my comic that I am going to try to keep in mind when drawing this chapter (and that I had in mind while story boarding it). Here’s a list for me to keep track of. Feel free to comment on the pages to come whether I follow this or not! Or any other feed back of course.

I will:

• Draw speech-bubbles by hand (the digital ones I used for ch 1 and 2 sometimes feel misplaced and ugly)
• Draw the border lines digitally (to gain symetry + easier on the eye)
• More balanced layouts (which is super important when having a non colored comic. I will try to prevent these kind of pages in the future.)
• Draw more backgrounds, environment, full body shots (to describe the characters and the world)
• Pace variety! (the past chapters have been really hasty and monotone!)
• Get to the point! (the main, common, intrigue of both story lines will come … very soon!)

Any other pointers are more than welcome of course!

Chapter 3: here we go!